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For the past seven days, you were late for work due to some unavoidable issues at home. Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several days. In your letter, explain why you were late for the last seven days apologise for the delay assure your manager that you will be on time from now on

For the past seven days, you were late for work due to some unavoidable issues at home. Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several days. In your letter, explain why you were late for the last seven days apologise for the delay assure your manager that you will be on time from now on r81gk
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to explain my situation why I was late from work last week. First, I apologize for showing up late at work for the last seven days. Actually, my mother is suffering from blood sugar disease which was become worse in recent days. So, I had to drop her at the clinic for treatment and my wife was out of town due to her professional training, arranged by her company. I am was alone at home to take care of my sick mother. Due to these issues, I had my last whole week was so busy and whose. So, as you can see from the above-said problem I was in trouble which caused me to arrive late at work. But, I promise that I will be on time at work for now. Yours Sincerely, John Hill.
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to
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my situation why I was late from
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last week.
First
, I apologize for showing up late at
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for the last seven days. Actually, my mother is suffering from blood sugar disease which
was become
worse in recent days.
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So
, I had to drop her at the clinic for treatment and my wife was out of town due to her professional training, arranged by her
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company
. I am was alone at home to take care of my sick mother. Due to these issues, I had my last whole week was
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busy and whose.
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So, as
you can
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see
from the above-said problem I was in trouble which caused me to arrive late at
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.
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But
, I promise that I will be on time at
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for
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. Yours
Sincerely
, John Hill.

IELTS letter For the past seven days, you were late for work due to some unavoidable issues at home. Write a letter to your manager explaining why you were late for work for several days. In your letter, explain why you were late for the last seven days apologise for the delay assure your manager that you will be on time from now on

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  American English
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142 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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