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You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to you home country leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him. Explain the reason you left course without completing it. Say during the course what did you like most about this course.

You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to you home country leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him. Explain the reason you left course without completing it. Say during the course what did you like most about this course. lW71W
Dear Mr. John, I am Neha one of your research students at Cambridge university. I am writing this letter for thanking you for your knowledge, wisdom and support that you provide during my academic year. The reason why I am leaving the course in the middle is that last Saturday, my mother had accident while she was going to market. Unfortunately, a car hit my mother as the breaks of car were failed which leads to imbalance of car and my mother's right arm was broken during this incident. Therefore, I decided to leave the course because I want to take care of my mother. Moreover, I learned various things during this course. First of all, the concepts and ideas added in this course were extremely practical that helped me in acquiring good score in my first semester. Most importantly, this course saves money as all the information and study material is available on the internet as the load of carrying books become less. Lastly, the period I devoted to this course helped me in enhancing my communication skills as well creativity level. Thanks again for imparting knowledge as well as your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Neha Jain
Dear Mr. John, I am
Neha
one of your research students at Cambridge university. I am writing this letter for thanking you for your knowledge, wisdom and support that you provide during my academic year. The reason why I am leaving the
course
in the middle is that last Saturday, my mother had accident while she was going to market. Unfortunately, a car hit my mother as the breaks of car
were failed
which leads to imbalance of car and my mother's right arm
was broken
during this incident.
Therefore
, I decided to
leave
the
course
because
I want to take care of my mother.
Moreover
, I learned various things during this
course
.
First of all
, the concepts and
ideas
added
in this
course
were
extremely
practical that
helped
me in acquiring
good
score in my
first
semester. Most
importantly
, this
course
saves money as all the information and study material is available on the internet as the load of carrying books become less.
Lastly
, the period I devoted to this
course
helped
me in enhancing my communication
skills
as well
creativity level. Thanks again for imparting knowledge
as well
as your time and consideration. Yours
faithfully
,
Neha
Jain
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IELTS letter You were studying in an English speaking country and suddenly needed to go back to you home country leaving your course incomplete. Write a letter to your teacher to thank him. Explain the reason you left course without completing it. Say during the course what did you like most about this course.

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