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Write a letter to book for the hotel

Write a letter to book for the hotel XVEjY
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to have a room booking at your hotel for coming weekends. And also would like to request to provide the detail information about nearby activities and places that is available near hotel. I will be arriving with my friend on this Saturday, 26th Jun evening to have a relaxing holiday, and leaving on the 28th Jun morning. We are looking for one bedroom with two single beds with the attached bedrooms with the sea view. Please let us know how much it will cost for the room and any surcharges for weekends booking. We are interested to have some adventure activities during our stay and appreciate if you could help to provide the list of activities that available nearby. Additonally, provide the information of must go places, eatery and markets of the town. Kindly email me the above requested information details before 26th Jun. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to have a room booking at your hotel for coming weekends. And
also
would like to request to provide the detail information about nearby activities and places
that is
available near hotel.

I will be arriving with my friend on this Saturday, 26th Jun evening to have a relaxing holiday, and leaving on the 28th Jun morning. We are looking for one bedroom with two single beds with the attached bedrooms with the sea view.
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Please
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let
us know how much it will cost for the room and any surcharges for weekends booking. We
are interested
to have
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some
adventure activities during our stay and appreciate if you could
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help
to provide the list of activities that available nearby.
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Additonally
, provide the information of
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must go
places, eatery and markets of the town. Kindly email me the above requested information
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details
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before
26th Jun.

I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".
to hear
from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully

IELTS letter Write a letter to book for the hotel

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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