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You did a bus tour with other people, however; you were not satisfied with the bus service Write a letter to the bus company about your journey and explain • What the problem with your tour was • Why you were not satisfied • Suggest how the company can improve

You did a bus tour with other people, however; you were not satisfied with the bus service Write a letter to the bus company about your journey and explain • What the problem with your tour was • Why you were not satisfied • Suggest how the company can improve VrQXJ

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to you about dissatisfaction with your bus service. I frequently travel with your tour agency having a good travel experience but this time I had a bad experience with your company. This time I was traveling with your bus no. MH 01 2518 onboarding ticket no. AWZXC from Mumbai to Ahmedabad on 13th January 2020. While traveling your bus on the said route I faced several problems. I was neither given a water bottle nor blanket during the whole journey. Because of the non-provision of the water bottle, I was not able to quench my thirst. Moreover, I was not able to sleep well on account of the non-supply of the blanket by your employees. I felt totally devastated during the itinerary which made me make a complaint about it to you. I have some suggestions for improving the quality of your services which may not cause any dissatisfaction with your customers including me in the future. First of all, I suggest you train your staff for the best customer service in the travel industry and secondly, I request you to advice your employees to put all the necessary items on the seat of the traveler in advance so that they don’t have to ask for those things during the journey. Hoping for prompt action in that regard. Yours Faithfully, Jack Marvel

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to you about dissatisfaction with your bus service. I frequently
 travel with your tour agency having a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 travel experience This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 this time I had a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 experience with your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
.

This time I was traveling with your bus no. MH 01 2518 onboarding ticket no. Possible spelling mistake found.AnzacANZACAWZAXC
AWZXC
 from Mumbai to Ahmedabad on 13th January 2020. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 traveling your bus on the said route I faced several problems. I was neither This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 a water bottle nor blanket during the whole journey.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 of the non-provision of the water bottle, I was not able to quench my thirst. Moreover
, I was not able to sleep well on account of the non-supply of the blanket by your employees. I felt totally
 devastated during the itinerary which made me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a complaint about it to you.

I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 suggestions for improving the quality of your services which may not cause any dissatisfaction with your customers including me in the future. This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".First
First of all
, I suggest you train your staff for the best customer service in the travel industry and secondly
, I request you to advice your employees to put all the necessary items on the seat of the traveler in advance This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that they don’t This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :solicitrequest
ask for
 those things during the journey.

Hoping for prompt action in that regard.

Yours Faithfully
,

Jack Marvel