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You have seen a tourist board welcoming nominations for best city award. Nominate your home city. Nominate your city and refer to each location. Explain what is the special about your city. See how winning an award would change your city.

You have seen a tourist board welcoming nominations for best city award. Nominate your home city. Nominate your city and refer to each location. Explain what is the special about your city. See how winning an award would change your city. jd5MN
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to register my hometown for ‘great city achievement’. I have seen advertisement published on the board outside your office. My name is Kosha Thakkar and my participation id is 2810BK1996. I am from the Udaipur which is also known as the city of Lake. Most of tourist finds it very attractive. It is in northern part of Gujarat. I would like to nominate my city under the title of most lucrative attraction for foreigners. There are numerous things which makes the city extremely beautiful. There are two special reason for upholding my view are uday villas palace and religious temple according. Doc you sign of the city gives Rajasthan in touch in food dishes. Citizens lives very delightful life and the town is having so much of positivity. If my hometown will get select out of list then it brings attention of numerous people and they will surely visit. Their spending inside the city leads to watch the employment of dewellers which is very mandatory for survival. I would like you to have a look inside the photographs and details attached. Looking forward for your respond about acceptance. Your’s faithfullyKosha P. Thakkar
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that I would like to register my hometown for ‘great city achievement’. I have
seen
advertisement published on the board outside your office. My name is
Kosha
Thakkar
and my participation id is 2810BK1996.

I am from the Udaipur which is
also
known as the city of Lake. Most of tourist finds it
very
attractive. It is in northern part of Gujarat. I would like to nominate my city under the title of most lucrative attraction for foreigners.

There are numerous things which
makes
the city
extremely
beautiful
. There are two special reason for upholding my view are
uday
villas palace and religious temple according. Doc you
sign
of the city gives Rajasthan in touch in food dishes. Citizens
lives
very
delightful life and the town is having
so
much of positivity.

If my hometown will
get
select out of list then it brings attention of numerous
people and
they will
surely
visit. Their spending inside the city leads to
watch
the employment of
dewellers
which is
very
mandatory for survival.

I would like you to have a look inside the photographs and
details
attached. Looking forward for your
respond
about acceptance.

Your’s
faithfullyKosha
P.
Thakkar
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IELTS letter You have seen a tourist board welcoming nominations for best city award. Nominate your home city. Nominate your city and refer to each location. Explain what is the special about your city. See how winning an award would change your city.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
205 words
6.0
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