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You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you.write a letter to your friend

You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you. write a letter to your friend waxGN
Dear sumith, How are you. I hope you are fine and doing well. As you know IAM doing job in IT company as a manager in Delhi. The timing of the job is 9to 5pm. I want to leave job due to some personal reasons and I would like to invite you in my place. About two months ago my wife met with an accident so, both of her legs fractured and he is unable to do any kind of work I have 6years old kid, and no body is there to look afterWith love, Kalpana
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sumith
, How are you. I hope you are fine and doing well. As you know IAM doing job in IT
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company
as a manager in Delhi. The timing of the job is 9to 5pm. I want to
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leave
job due to
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some
personal reasons and I would like to invite you in my place. About two months ago my wife met with an accident
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so
, both of her legs
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fractured and
he is unable to do any kind of work I have 6years
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old
kid, and
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no body
is there to look
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afterWith
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love
,
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Kalpana
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IELTS letter You are leaving your job and would like to invite your friend to replace you. write a letter to your friend

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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