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You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain how you were helped State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain how you were helped State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience W9W5
To whom it may concern, I am writing this letter with regards to my Wonder full experience at your store. I visited your store at Northbridge mall last Sunday. Let me explain you my situation, I am very outdoor person, Love to go out on Hiking. I went there to buy a good quality hiking shoes. I was very impressed with your welcoming staff and all the employees were very polite and having Pleasant smile when they talk to the Customers. All these things assured me that I will get a nice article according to my needs. I was addressed by Laura Stevenson for my query, To my surprise she was well informed about different kind of boots, she answered all my queries which made very easy for me to choose the right pair of shoes. She even helped me with latest offer going on in the store. I never felt so relaxed while buying stuff. All credit goes to your employee. In the light of such a supreme experience, I would love to buy your membership moreover I am going to recommend you to all my friends, Family members and my colleagues. I hope my effort brings a positive response at your store. Thanking you for your consideration. Yours faithfully
To whom it may concern,

I am writing this letter
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with regards to
my Wonder full experience at your
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store
. I visited your
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store
at
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Northbridge
mall last Sunday.

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Let
me
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explain
you my situation, I am
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very
outdoor person,
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Love
to go out on Hiking. I went there to
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buy
a
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good
quality hiking shoes. I was
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very
impressed with your welcoming staff and all the employees were
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
polite and having Pleasant smile when they talk to the Customers. All these things assured me that I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
a nice article according to my needs. I
was addressed
by Laura Stevenson for my query, To my surprise she was
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well informed
about
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different
kind of boots, she answered all my queries which made
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
easy for me to choose the right pair of shoes. She even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me with
A determiner is probably missing here: "the latest".
latest
offer going on in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
. I never felt
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
relaxed while buying stuff. All credit goes to your employee.

In the light of such a supreme experience, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
your membership
moreover
I am going to recommend you to all my friends, Family members and my colleagues. I hope my effort brings a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response at your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
. Thanking you for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully
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IELTS letter You were recently impressed by a staff member at a supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter: Describe the situation Explain how you were helped State what you are going to do as a result of this good experience

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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