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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend l2y9
Dear John, I hope you're doing well and how's the young Sarah? Well, I'm writing to share one job opening with you that I think you might be interested in applying. With regard to the job, there is a vacancy for the position of a software engineer in Microsoft, where I work. It's a full-time job and the organization is looking for candidates with a minimum of 5 years of working experience in any programming language. As for the vacancy, it was yesterday that my manager told me that there are few job openings and asked me for any reference. Your name strike first to my mind and I thought of sharing this news with you. You'd definitely be a strong candidate to fill this position. I think that this would be a wonderful opportunity for you to switch job, as you mentioned during summer vacation that you want to return to your original IT career from the sales job. Moreover, the job location would be the same as your current location so Sarah's school won't be impacted by the job change. Maybe you should consider all the positive aspects of this role and decide. Let me know if you find it suitable for you and I'll refer you for this position. Also, say my hi to both Amy and Sarah. Best wishes, Ell
Dear John,

I hope you're doing well and how's the young Sarah? Well, I'm writing to share one
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job
opening with you that I
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think
you might
be interested
in applying.

With regard to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
, there is a vacancy for the position of a software engineer in Microsoft, where I work. It's a full-time
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
and the organization is looking for candidates with a minimum of 5 years of working experience in any programming language.

As for the vacancy, it was yesterday that my manager
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that there are few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
openings and asked me for any reference. Your name strike
first
to my mind and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thought
of sharing this news with you. You'd definitely be a strong candidate to fill this position.

I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that this would be a wonderful opportunity for you to switch
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
, as you mentioned during summer vacation that you want to return to your original IT career from the sales
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
.
Moreover
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
location would be the same as your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
location
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
Sarah's school won't
be impacted
by the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
job
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
. Maybe you should consider all the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
aspects of this role and decide.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Let
me know if you find it suitable for you and I'll refer you for this position.
Also
, say my hi to both Amy and Sarah.

Best wishes,

Ell
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter, you should: give some details about the job mention how you came across the job opportunity explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
223 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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