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YOU WERE ON THE FLIGHT TO LONDON AND YOU FORGOT THE BAG AT THE AIRPOT. -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEM -GIVE THEM THE DETAILS OF YOUR BAG - WHAT YOU WANT THEM TO DO WITH THE BAG

YOU WERE ON THE FLIGHT TO LONDON AND YOU FORGOT THE BAG AT THE AIRPOT. -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEM -GIVE THEM THE DETAILS OF YOUR BAG - WHAT YOU WANT THEM TO DO WITH THE BAG qV1nG
Dear Sir or Madam, I would like to inform you that I have forgotten my bag at the airpot. Actually, I was on a flight to London and when I got at the airpot, I was in a rush to attend a meeting which was arranged in my hotel where I was gonna stay. I was running late according to the meeting schedule, and I totally forgot about my bag. The colour of the bag is red and it can contain approximately 10 kgs. weight. It might not be that heavy because it just contains clothes and other cosmetics. The handle of the bag is blue which is little old as a colour combination of red and blue, so, it might be busy for you to identify. Also, it has a slip on the bottom corner that contains the initials of my name. I would really appreciate if you will send my bag to the hotel. I am willing to pay all the charges of sending it to my hotel. With Regards
Dear Sir or Madam,

I would like to inform you that I have forgotten my
bag
at the
airpot
. Actually, I was on a flight to London and when I
got
at the
airpot
, I was in a rush to attend a meeting which
was arranged
in my hotel where I was
gonna
stay. I was running late according to the meeting schedule, and I
totally
forgot about my bag.

The
colour
of the
bag
is red
and it can contain approximately 10
kgs
.
weight
. It might not be that heavy
because
it
just
contains clothes and other cosmetics. The handle of the
bag
is blue which is
little
old
as a
colour
combination of red and blue,
so
, it might be busy for you to identify.
Also
, it has a slip on the bottom corner that contains the initials of my name.

I would
really
appreciate if you will
send
my
bag
to the hotel. I am willing to pay all the charges of sending it to my hotel.

With Regards
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IELTS letter YOU WERE ON THE FLIGHT TO LONDON AND YOU FORGOT THE BAG AT THE AIRPOT. -EXPLAIN YOUR PROBLEM -GIVE THEM THE DETAILS OF YOUR BAG - WHAT YOU WANT THEM TO DO WITH THE BAG

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