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You successfully passed a job interview . You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date

You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date m180O
Dear Natali I am writing this letter to inform about the starting job date. I am expected to start on 15 th November, but due to some unexpected peroblems I will start the job after coming week of lith November that is 2and of November. . I am seriously sowwy for not Commencing my job on time. I know how important it is to being there but after passing my interview. 9 was on my way to home, and I had Car accident. Because of air bags, 9 did not get injured but my call was totally damaged. In order to move in a new city I have to finish my paperwork with insurance company and it will take about one week! so! Cannot leave my cliveent city till 21st yNovember It was an unavoidable incident and 9 know how necessary this job is for me and, therefore, I am ready to do work online fecom home. I know my job duties and I have asked one of my friend who is working there to help me. I hope you will forgive me and be assured of my commitment to This company and its Jukane your's sincerely Dinga Vonne.
Dear
Natali


I am writing this letter to inform about

the
starting
job
date. I am
expected
to


start
on
15 th
November,
but
due to

some
unexpected
peroblems
I will
start


the
job
after coming week of
lith
November

that
is 2and of November.
.
I am
seriously
sowwy
for not
Commencing


my
job
on time. I know how
important


it is to being there
but
after passing

my
interview. 9 was on my way to

home
, and I had Car accident.
Because


of air bags, 9 did not
get
injured
but


my
call was
totally
damaged. In
order


to
move
in a new city I
have to
finish

my paperwork with insurance
company


and
it will take about one week!
so
!

Cannot
leave
my
cliveent
city till 21st
yNovember


It was an unavoidable incident and 9

know how necessary this
job
is for me and,

therefore
, I am ready to do work

online
fecom
home. I know my
job


duties and I have asked one of my friend

who
is working there to
help
me.

I hope you will forgive me and
be assured


of my commitment to This
company
and its

Jukane


your's
sincerely


Dinga
Vonne
.
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IELTS letter You successfully passed a job interview. You are expected to start on November 15, but you will not be available on that date

Letter
  American English
28 paragraphs
199 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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