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When choosing a job. The salary is the most important consideration. What extent do you agree or disagree? agree to some extent. motivation & reward less paid not hapy afeet work praising position/ good comany nice culture , tired

When choosing a job. The salary is the most important consideration. What extent agree to some extent. motivation & reward less paid not hapy afeet work praising position/ good comany nice culture, tired VBP5m
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about my mobile lost. I am Pragna Patel, a mobile insurance holder of your Bita Insurance company. I wanted to let you know that I lost my Samsung galaxy note plus mobile phone yesterday that I recently bought it about 3 weeks back. I went on a 5 days tour to visit Italy. On the last day of, trip we had a nice party and when I came back to the resort I realised that I forgot my cell phone at the party hall. I went to the hall again and checked there but it was too late and I could not see it there. I request you to kindly send me a replacement so that it would not affect my work. Yours sincerely, Praggna Patel
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about my mobile lost.

I am
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Pragna
Patel, a mobile insurance holder of your
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Bita
Insurance
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company
.
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I
wanted to
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let
you know that I lost my
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Samsung galaxy
note plus mobile phone yesterday that I recently
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bought
it about 3 weeks back.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
went on a 5 days tour to visit Italy. On the last day of, trip we had a nice party and when I came back to the resort I
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realised
that I forgot my cell phone at the party hall. I went to the hall again and
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checked
there
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but
it was too late and I could not
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see
it there.

I request you to kindly
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send
me a replacement
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so
that it would not affect my work.

Yours
sincerely
,

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Praggna
Patel

IELTS letter When choosing a job. The salary is the most important consideration. What extent agree to some extent. motivation & reward less paid not hapy afeet work praising position/ good comany nice culture, tired

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135 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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