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You recently went on a business trip to another country and you faced an issue at the airport. Write a letter to the airport management and include ● what the details of your flight were. ● what the problem at the airport was. ● some suggestions for improvement.

You recently went on a business trip to another country and you faced an issue at the airport. Write a letter to the airport management and include ● what the details of your flight were. ● what the problem at the airport was. ● some suggestions for improvement. MM3dp
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem occurred recently, while traveling from Abu Dhabi International Airport. I was traveling through a business class ticket of Etihad Airways, flight number EY223 on 16tth April 2021 at 3. 00 pm from Abu Dhabi to Frankfurt. I was waiting for my flight in the premium lounge in front of gate no 23, where I paid $99 entry fees but sadly the internet services were not working inside the lounge and I came to know that it is being disrupted since last one month. Kindly keep supervising the maintenance team and check the reports time to time. I would like to suggest you that fiber optics is better than broadband, so it will be nice to update the internet cables inside the airport as nowadays, it is necessary for everyone. I look forward to hearing from you Yours faithfully Vishal
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you about the problem occurred recently, while traveling from Abu Dhabi International Airport.

I was traveling through a business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
class
ticket of Etihad Airways, flight number EY223 on 16tth April 2021 at 3. 00 pm from Abu Dhabi to Frankfurt.

I was waiting for my flight in the premium lounge in front of gate no 23, where I paid $99 entry fees
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but
sadly
the internet services were not working inside the lounge and I came to know that it is
being disrupted
since last one month.

Kindly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
supervising the maintenance team and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
check
the reports time to time. I would like to suggest you that fiber optics is better than broadband,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
it will be nice to update the internet cables inside the airport as nowadays, it is necessary for everyone.

I look forward to hearing from you

Yours
faithfully


Vishal
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IELTS letter You recently went on a business trip to another country and you faced an issue at the airport. Write a letter to the airport management and include ● what the details of your flight were. ● what the problem at the airport was. ● some suggestions for improvement.

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  American English
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151 words
6.5
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