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Write a letter expressing your interest in a job in a different country. Write to a job recruiter. Your letter should include: • Why you want to work abroad • What type of job you want to have • Questions about working abroad

Write a letter expressing your interest in a job in a different country. Write to a job recruiter. Your letter should include: • Why you want to work abroad • What type of job you want to have • Questions about working abroad RN08M
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you to express my interest in your offer of work outside the country. I am a highly-qualified specialist with broad specter of skills and working abroad is a great opportunity to improve and strengthen them. Furthermore, this is a good chance to improve my English. I am really inspired by hospitality and I used to work for 15 years in the different positions from waiter to head-manager. For the past two years I have worked as bar-manager so I want to continue my experience in the hospitality sphere. I also have a bunch of experience in positions such as hotel-supervisor and night-shift administrator. I have several questions to you about work in the foreign country. What documents should I prepare to apply for any type of work? And, how long it takes to make work visa to different countries and what options do I have? Thank you for your answer in advance! Hope to hear from you soon! Faithfully, Valentin Bakin
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to you to express my interest in your offer of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
outside the country. I am a
highly
-qualified specialist with broad specter of
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skills
and working abroad is a great opportunity to
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improve
and strengthen them.
Furthermore
, this is a
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good
chance to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
my English.

I am
really
inspired by hospitality and I
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used
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
for 15 years in the
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different
positions from waiter to head-manager. For the past two years I have worked as bar-manager
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so
I want to continue my experience in the hospitality sphere. I
also
have a bunch of experience in positions such as hotel-supervisor and night-shift administrator.

I have several questions to you about
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
in the foreign country. What documents should I prepare to apply for any type of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
? And, how long it takes to
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make
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work
visa to
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different
countries and what options do I have?

Thank you for your answer in advance! Hope to hear from you
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soon
!

Faithfully
,

Valentin
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IELTS letter Write a letter expressing your interest in a job in a different country. Write to a job recruiter. Your letter should include: • Why you want to work abroad • What type of job you want to have • Questions about working abroad

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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