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Family party at your house. living in different city Tell him about the party why you want to invite info how to get to the party

Family party at your house. living in different city Tell him about the party why you want to invite info how to get to the party n6xGR
Dear Vivek, Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. It's been very long since we last met. I am writing this letter to invite you to a family party we are arranging on Sunday, 20th December on occasion of my parent's silver jubilee. You already know that my parents have a special liking for you and they haven't seen you since you have shifted to Mumbai. I have another selfish motive for inviting you. You can rock the party by playing some songs with your new guitar. I am not going to take no for an answer. This party is on 20th December and we have booked a hall in Dattani Square banquet halls. It's the new hotel located on the highway between Mumbai and Vasai. It's 2 hour away from you house and also available on google maps for easy navigation. If you are planning to come by bus or train, let me know so that we can arrange a pickup. Looking forward to see you on 20th December. Yours lovingly, Sameer.
Dear Vivek,

Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. It's been
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very
long since we last met. I am writing this letter to invite you to a family party we are arranging on
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 20th December 2021 is not a Sunday, but a Monday.
Sunday, 20th December
on occasion of my parent's silver jubilee.

You already know that my parents have a special liking for you and they haven't
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seen
you since you have shifted to Mumbai. I have another selfish motive for inviting you. You can rock the party by playing
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some
songs with your new guitar. I am not going to take no for an answer.

This party is on 20th
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December and
we have booked a hall in
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Dattani
Square banquet halls. It's the new hotel located on the highway between Mumbai and
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Vasai
. It's
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2 hour
away from you
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house
and
also
available on
Did you mean "Google Maps"?
google maps
for easy navigation. If you are planning to
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come
by bus or train,
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let
me know
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so
that we can arrange a pickup.

Looking forward to
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see
you on 20th December.

Yours
lovingly
,

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Sameer
.

IELTS letter Family party at your house. living in different city Tell him about the party why you want to invite info how to get to the party

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179 words
5.0
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