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you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on a holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter write him: • how you felt about the trip • how did you take care of his house in his absence and • Share your gratitude to him.

you were on a pleasant trip and had rented a flat from your friend who was on a holiday. Write a letter to your friend and in your letter write him: • how you felt about the trip • how did you take care of his house in his absence and • Share your gratitude to him. gDEJ1

I would like to take this opportunity for thanking you on (for) renting your flat during my pleasant trip to London last month. It was (an) unforgettable trip and one of the best holidays, I ever had. London is a beautiful city, (with) awesome whether (weather) and the delicious food, I cannot stop thinking about this even after coming back home and started with routine life. I have visited lots of place and will share some of the photos in coming days. Since you have come back from your holiday, you must have noticed that flat is, as clean and tidy as it was before. It was my daily schedule to clean the house before staring for the day to explore beautiful city. I have also taken care of your plants kept in balcony. There might be some flowers by this time, isn’t it? Thank you for advice to stay at your flat during our call prior to my holiday as I was unable to find hotel room which falls under holiday budget. Once again, I thankful for your support and looking forward for planning a holiday with you. Best Regards,

I would like to take this opportunity for thanking you on (for) renting your flat during my pleasant trip to London ‘last month’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last month
. It was (an) unforgettable trip and one of the best You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holidays
, I ever had.

London is a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 city, (with) awesome whether (weather) and the delicious food, I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 thinking about this even after coming back home and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 with routine life. I have visited lots of place and will share If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?some
some of the
 photos in coming days.

Since you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back from your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have noticed that flat is, as clean and tidy as it was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
. It was my daily schedule to clean the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 staring for the day to explore This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 city. I have also
 taken care of your plants This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 in balcony. There might be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 flowers by this time, isn’t it?

Thank you for advice to stay at your flat during our call prior to my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 as I was unable to find hotel room which falls under You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 budget.

Once again, Did you mean "I am"?I am
I
 thankful for your support and looking forward for planning a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfestivityrecessfestivalfeastanniversaryvacation
holiday
 with you.

Best Regards, 