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Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found.

Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found. PrN02
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inquire about an item which was left on one of your airplanes. On Monday 19th June I was on flight 302 to Tokyo. When I got off the airplane, I realized that one of my bags was missing. It was a dark brown leather bag with two white straw handles. There were three gifts for my family members inside the bag. One was an expensive watch with gold lines strap for my husband. There was also light red silk dress for my daughter. The third item was a huge brown teddy bear for y son. Also, there was my dairy which is the most essential for me. In the event of the bag being found, I can be contacted on 911484564 from in the morning to night every day. Yours faithfully, Ziyoda Haitova.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inquire about an item which was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
left
on one of your airplanes. On Monday 19th June I was on flight 302 to Tokyo. When I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
off the airplane, I realized that one of my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bags
was missing.

It was a dark brown leather
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
with two white straw
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
handles
. There were three gifts for my family members inside the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
. One was an expensive
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
with gold lines strap for my husband. There was
also
light red silk dress for my daughter. The third item was a huge brown teddy bear for y son.
Also
, there was my dairy which is the most essential for me.

In the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
bag
being found
, I can
be contacted
on 911484564 from in the morning to night every day.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Ziyoda
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Haitova
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the airline describing the object and giving information on how you can be reached if it is found.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
141 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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