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For instance, there are a lot of functions in my mobile phone but I use only half of them. If there were some choices to select the functions for the gadgets that we are buying, then they would be more user-friendly and easy to operate.

For instance, there are a lot of functions in my mobile phone but I use only half of them. If there were some choices to select the functions for the gadgets that we are buying, then they would be more user-friendly and easy to operate. LlPK3
Dear Tina Thank you for your letter. I’m really happy to hear from you. Well, we use various electronic gadgets in our daily life because they make our life easier. I am pretty passionate about them. I can’t imagine my life without them especially without my mobile phone. However, it seems to me that using all these high-techs is not so easy for everybody. I agree with you that they have a variety of functions that we don’t need. For instance, there are a lot of functions in my mobile phone but I use only half of them. If there were some choices to select the functions for the gadgets that we are buying, then they would be more user-friendly and easy to operate. It’s great news that you are presented a robot pet. I have always wanted to have one. Anyway, please tell me a little bit more about your new robot. What kind of functions does it have? How much does it cost? Do you like it? Looking forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes Kate
Dear Tina

Thank you for your letter. I’m
really
happy to hear from you.

Well, we
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use
various electronic gadgets in our daily life
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because
they
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make
our life easier. I am pretty passionate about them. I can’t imagine my life without them
especially
without my mobile phone.
However
, it seems to me that using all these high-techs is not
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so
easy for everybody. I
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agree
with you that they have a variety of
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functions
that we don’t need.
For instance
, there are
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a lot of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
functions
in my mobile phone
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but
I
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use
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only
half of them. If there were
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some
choices to select the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
functions
for the gadgets that we are buying, then they would be more user-friendly and easy to operate.

Did you mean "its great news"?
It’s great news
that you
are presented
a robot pet. I have always wanted to have one. Anyway,
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please
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tell
me a
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
more about your new robot. What kind of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
functions
does it have? How much does it cost? Do you like it?

Looking forward to hearing from you
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.

Best wishes Kate

IELTS letter For instance, there are a lot of functions in my mobile phone but I use only half of them. If there were some choices to select the functions for the gadgets that we are buying, then they would be more user-friendly and easy to operate.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
178 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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