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Your parents will not let you go on holiday as they want you to study for your exams.Write a letter to a friend asking for her advice on your vacation

Your parents will not let you go on holiday as they want you to study for your exams. Write a letter to a friend asking for her advice on your vacation 6d3L8
Dear I would appreciate it if you could give me some advice about my holiday. This week I want to go on vacation with groupmates but we also have exams in science. I think I have studied well in the science and am ready for the exams. But my parents want me to be better prepared and get better grades. They are resisting me going on vacation. What advice can you give in this regard. It would be of great help if you could advice me. Yours sincerely,
Dear I would appreciate it if you could give me
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advice about my holiday. This week I want to go on vacation with groupmates
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but
we
also
have exams in science. I
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think
I have studied well in the science and am ready for the exams.
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But
my parents want me to be better prepared and
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get
better grades. They are resisting me going on vacation. What advice can you give in this regard. It would be of great
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help
if you could
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advice
me. Yours
sincerely
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IELTS letter Your parents will not let you go on holiday as they want you to study for your exams. Write a letter to a friend asking for her advice on your vacation

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  American English
1 paragraphs
88 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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