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Short on Intimacy Ana and James

Short on Intimacy Ana and James JLB15

Hello, I am Fardin Ebrahimi I want to talk about James and her wife (Ana) sexual life. Ana and James have been married for three years. Ana had a disease and her problem only be cured by having sex every night but her husband (James) also had a disease, he could not have sex during the night other words he had no sexual power at night, although she worked in the public during the day and she could not have sex with James during the day, so what did she do to solve her problem? First, she thought it may seem strange because she wanted more frequently than her husband and as far as James was concerned everything was fine but she was not satisfied and she decided to turn to Abby for how could she solve this situation. Anna thought there was something wrong with her body but she could not believe that because she worked with the public and she got frequent remarks that she was a beautiful woman, she was at a total loss and frustrated, she wanted more intimacy from James and she did not know how to get more intimacy from her husband she wrote many letters and expressed to James and she hoped to reach him after while she found what she did do, she must get a night job if she gets a job at night she will solve her problem because she can have sex with James during the day, James can have sex during the day but he could not have sex during the night

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Fardin
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 I want to talk about James and her wife (Ana) sexual life.

Ana and James have been married
 for three years. Ana had a disease and her problem This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
be cured
 by having You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 every You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 her husband (James) also
 had a disease, he could not have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 other words he had no sexual power at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
, although she worked in the public during the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).day, and
day and
 she could not have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 with James during the day, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 what did she do to solve her problem?

First
, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 it may seem strange This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she wanted more frequently
 than her husband and as far as James was concerned
 everything was fine This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she was not Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).satisfied, and
satisfied and
 she decided to turn to Abby for how could she solve this situation.

Anna This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonedassumedbelievedconsidered
thought
 there was something This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:incorrect
wrong
 with her body This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 she could not believe that This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she worked with the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).public, and
public and
 she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 frequent remarks that she was a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 woman, she was at a total loss and frustrated, she wanted more intimacy from Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).James, and
James and
 she did not know how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 more intimacy from her husband she wrote This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 letters and expressed to Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).James, and
James and
 she hoped to reach him after while she found what she did do, she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 job if she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 a job at You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night
 she will solve her problem This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 she can have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 with James during the day, James can have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 during the day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 he could not have You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsexuality
sex
 during the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmidnight
night