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You were invited to go out by your friend. Due to some reason you couldn’t go. Write a letter apologizing for this and suggest a new time and place to meet. Apologize Explain reasons on why you can’t make it Suggest a new time and place to meet

You were invited to go out by your friend. Due to some reason you couldn’t go. Write a letter apologizing for this and suggest a new time and place to meet. Apologize Explain reasons on why you can’t make it Suggest a new time and place to meet lRwl1
My dearest Aida, I’m writing to let you know that, we’ve scheduled before for hanging out and having fun with each other on Wednesday evening. I’m really sorry to inform you that unfortunately I can’t come with you out. While I’ve said you previously, Sina had made a decision to come Isfahan but his flight was cancelled and he couldn’t buy another ticket, due to the fact that they were all sold. Surprisingly, yesterday night one of the passengers cancelled his booked ticket and Sina has bought it today. Tomorrow afternoon he is planning to come here. Now I’m on cloud nine and superb arouse the interest of seeing him after three weeks. What’s more, I want to spring a surprise on him by going to meet him warmly at the airport. Rather than this meeting cancellation, we’d love it if you and your husband could come to get together. We will be free from Thursday to Sunday. How about Thursday night at 9 in Arakhan restaurant instead? Please let me know which day will be suit for you. With best wishes, Mahshid
My dearest Aida,

I’m writing to
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let
you know that, we’ve scheduled
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before
for hanging out and having fun with each other on Wednesday evening.

I’m
really
sorry to inform you that unfortunately I can’t
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come
with you out. While I’ve said you previously,
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Sina
had made a decision to
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come
Isfahan
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but
his flight was
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cancelled and
he couldn’t
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buy
another ticket, due to the fact that they were all sold.
Surprisingly
,
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yesterday night
one of the passengers cancelled his booked ticket and
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Sina
has
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bought
it
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today
. Tomorrow afternoon he is planning to
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come
here.
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Now
I’m on cloud nine and superb arouse the interest of seeing him after three weeks. What’s more, I want to spring a surprise on him by going to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
him
warmly
at the airport.

Rather
than this meeting cancellation, we’d
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love
it if you and your husband could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to
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get
together. We will be free from Thursday to Sunday. How about Thursday night at 9 in
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Arakhan
restaurant
instead
?

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Please
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let
me know which day will be suit for you.

With best wishes,

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Mahshid
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IELTS letter You were invited to go out by your friend. Due to some reason you couldn’t go. Write a letter apologizing for this and suggest a new time and place to meet. Apologize Explain reasons on why you can’t make it Suggest a new time and place to meet

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  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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