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Imagine you have been away from home for some time. Write an email (200 words) to a friend or family member to ask them for news from home and to give them your news. Try to use the verb get at least twice.

Imagine you have been away from home for some time. Write an email (200 words) to a friend or family member to ask them for news from home and to give them your news. Try to use the verb get at least twice. OyQop
Dear Mom How have you been? I am writing this gmail to ask you for new from home and give my news to you. You will be pleased to know that I life so well. Everyday i go to school with my best friend, she very friendly and always help I when I have difficulty. In the room I fell comfortable and quite so I can focus to study. It terms of eating is also good here is delicious. Everything is convenient so you don't too worry about me. I have been away from home for sometime so I feel really really homesick. I would particularly like to know news from home mamely helath, work or plant of our family member. Please send my regards to grandparents. I am looking forward to hearing from you. Best, Hoa
Dear Mom

How have you been?

I am writing this
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gmail
to ask you for new from home and give my news to you.

You will be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
pleased
to know that I
Possible agreement error -- use verb form: "live".
life
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
well.
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?
Everyday
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
go to school with my best friend, she
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
friendly and always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
I when I have difficulty. In the room I fell comfortable and quite
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can focus to study. It terms of eating is
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
here is delicious. Everything is convenient
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
you don't
Did you mean "to worry"?
too worry
about me.

I have been away from home for sometime
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I feel
really
really
homesick. I would
particularly
like to know news from home
Possible spelling mistake found.
mamely
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helath
, work or plant of our family member.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
send
my regards to grandparents. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Best,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Hoa
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IELTS letter Imagine you have been away from home for some time. Write an email (200 words) to a friend or family member to ask them for news from home and to give them your news. Try to use the verb get at least twice.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
136 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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