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Movie plan with a friend but could not able to join

Movie plan with a friend but could not able to join gbaEL

Dear A, As you made a plan to watch a movie on this weekend, I couldnot able to join with you because I need to pickup my parents from airport on the same day. As you already aware of that my sister is staying at California, my parents have been to USA three months back. They are planning to come back by this week and they may reach Hyderabad over this weekend. So I have to pickup them from airport. As I cannot join with you, one of our friend C may join with you, moreover he is staying a hostel room he might spend some time with you as there is a long weekend. anyhow I am going to ask him for confirmation and let you know accordingly. C is very talkative person and who can mingle and adapt all the surroundings in a short time. I hope he will give good accompany with you. We can meet some other time and plan to do some other activities. Yours lovingly B

Dear A,

As you made a plan to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 a movie on this weekend, I Possible spelling mistake found.could not
couldnot
 able to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 with you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I need to pickup my parents from airport on the same day.

As you already aware of that my sister is staying at California, my parents have been to USA three months back. They are planning to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 back by this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).week, and
week and
 they may reach Hyderabad over this weekend. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 pickup them from airport.

As I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 with you, one of our friend C may This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :consolidatefuse
join
 with you, moreover
 he is staying a hostel room he might spend This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time with you as there is a long weekend. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?anyhow,
anyhow
 I am going to ask him for confirmation and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know accordingly
.

C is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 talkative person and who can mingle and adapt all the surroundings in a short time. I hope he will give This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
The usual collocation for "accompany" is "by," not "with." It is better to say this: "accompany by".accompany by
accompany with
 you.

We can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other time and plan to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 other activities.

Yours lovingly


B