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you were hurt in a small incident letter to manager

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Dear Sir or madam, I am writing to bring to your attention the incident in your supermarket last week. I would also like to present some suggestions to avoid similar cases in the future. I am Amr Masoud and I have been a Structural Engineer at Stantec for the last 3 years since I moved into Cairo, and I have been visiting your supermarket frequently preferring it over IGA that closer to my home. On this ocasion, however, last week I had an arm injury after I slipped and fell down due to the wate on the floor, after I have visited the doctor and I had to put my arm in cast for at least three weeks. Although the high level of service I receive at your store, but I believe that such incident could have been avoided if faster action was taken to remove the spilled water, also a sign should have been put at the wet areas to prevent this from reocurring. I hope you take this into accout. Your faithfully, Amr Masoud
Dear Sir or madam,

I am writing to bring to your attention the incident in your supermarket
last week
. I would
also
like to present
some
suggestions to avoid similar cases in the future.

I
am
Amr
Masoud
and I have been a Structural Engineer at
Stantec
for the last 3 years since I
moved
into Cairo, and I have been visiting your supermarket
frequently
preferring it over IGA that closer to my home.

On this
ocasion
,
however
, last week I had an arm injury after I slipped and fell down due to the
wate
on the floor, after I have visited the doctor and I had to put my arm in cast for at least three weeks.

Although the high level of service I receive at your store,
but
I believe that such incident could have
been avoided
if faster action
was taken
to remove the spilled water,
also
a
sign
should have
been put
at the wet areas to
prevent
this from
reocurring
.

I hope you take this into
accout
.

Your
faithfully
,

Amr
Masoud
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IELTS letter you were hurt in a small incident letter to manager

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  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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