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Dear Sir! I am a student of accommodation in section 4B. i have strong dissatisfaction to live here. I would tell the truth that there was a problem in heating system. Last night while we were having a shower all of a sudden, it had some issue in heating. Water was cold and we were forced to stop it. At that day our flats have been cold. My friends and I catch flu. We will look forward to olve this problem. Otherwise we will contact with Student's society. Yours faithfullyMrs Enigma
Dear Sir! I am a student of accommodation in section 4B.
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
have strong dissatisfaction to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
here. I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
the truth that there was a problem in heating system. Last night while we were having a shower all of a sudden, it had
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
issue in heating. Water was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
and we
were forced
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
stop
it. At that day our flats have been
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
cold
. My friends and I catch flu. We will look forward to
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olve
this problem.
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Otherwise
we will contact with Student's society. Yours
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faithfullyMrs
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Enigma
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IELTS letter you are a student of Brighton university.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
90 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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