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Work id being done on street and the noise is disturbing you

Work id being done on street and the noise is disturbing you DNGa6
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sunil Kumar, and I live on 315 Mahaveer Palms, Kodhichikanhalli MainRoad, Bangalore, 560076. Since May 20, 2021, there has been construction of a bridge on Kodhichikanhalli Main road, and the noise from the bridge is disturbing the entire neighborhood day and night. While we appreciate the work done by the local council members on this project, our life has become hell for the past 15 days due to this project. Most of the residents in our neighborhood understand the need to use large equipment to construct bridge, and they do not mind loud noise coming from the construction equipment during the day. We residents request the local council to pause the heavy equipment work by 8 PM everyday, so that kids and elderly members can sleep peacefully. After 8 PM, the workers can focus on tasks that do not make loud noise. We residents appreciate the job done by workers at the site, and we would be happy to provide water and other basic amenities to the individuals who are working over there. Yours Sincerely, Sunil Kumar
Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Sunil Kumar, and I
live
on 315
Mahaveer
Palms,
Kodhichikanhalli
MainRoad
, Bangalore, 560076. Since May 20, 2021, there has been construction of a bridge on
Kodhichikanhalli
Main road, and the noise from the bridge is disturbing the entire neighborhood day and night. While we appreciate the work done by the local council members on this project, our life has become hell for the past 15 days due to this project. Most of the residents in our neighborhood understand the need to
use
large equipment to construct bridge, and they do not mind loud noise coming from the construction equipment during the day.

We residents request the local council to pause the heavy equipment work by 8 PM
everyday
,
so
that kids and elderly members can sleep
peacefully
. After 8 PM, the workers can focus on tasks that do not
make
loud noise. We residents appreciate the job done by workers at the site, and we would be happy to provide water and other basic amenities to the individuals who are working over there.

Yours
Sincerely
, Sunil Kumar
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IELTS letter Work id being done on street and the noise is disturbing you

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5.5
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