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You have been experiencing problem with the local public manager. Write a letter to the manager of the public transportation services. In your letter: - include how do you use the transport - what problems have you experienced - suggest how they can improve the services Write at least 150 words.

You have been experiencing problem with the local public manager. Write a letter to the manager of the public transportation services. In your letter: - include how do you use the transport - what problems have you experienced - suggest how they can improve the services m2JOK

Dear Mr. Tom, I am writing to you to bring to your notice that there are quite a few issues regarding the bus service that may need your attention on priority. I am not able to function because of the untimely arrivals and departure of the buses for the past two weeks. To tell you my experience, due to the heavy rainfall I prevent myself to be late for my work which is why I prefer getting on a bus an hour earlier. However, the bus never has arrived on time for the past two week and as a result I have been given a warning from my company for my late coming. Furthermore, my children’s performance has been hampered due to not reaching school on time. Due to above reasons, I request you to consider my suggestion. If there could be a live tracker on the mobile app that would immensely help all the passengers as well as to your administration. The live tracker would show the exact location of the bus which would definitely buy some time for us to plan our day. I hope we will see the updates in coming days. Thank you. Yours sincerely, Anuja

Dear Mr. Tom,

I am writing to you to bring to your notice that there are quite a few issues regarding the bus service that may need your attention on priority. I am not able to function This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of the untimely
 arrivals and departure of the buses for the past two weeks.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you my experience, due to the heavy rainfall I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :preclude
prevent
 myself to be late for my work which is why I prefer getting on a bus an hour earlier. However
, the bus never has arrived on time for the past two Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: "weeks".weeks
week
 and as a result
 I have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 a warning from my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 for my late coming. Furthermore
, my children’s performance has been hampered
 due to not reaching school on time.

Due to above reasons, I request you to consider my suggestion. If there could be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 tracker on the mobile app that would immensely
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 all the passengers as well
 as to your administration. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 tracker would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the exact location of the bus which would definitely This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 time for us to plan our day. I hope we will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the updates in coming days.

Thank you.

Yours sincerely
,

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