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Write aletter to manager of the company.explane what the problem is.

Write aletter to manager of the company. explane what the problem is. XVOBN
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to enquire to study to the English Teachers Training Course which I saw some information online about it. This course vital to rise their knowledge more and more. The training course is organised per online for teachers to redevelop more their skills and techniques between two and three weeks by the most experienced foreigner trainers. It gives us to be aware of knowing the educational news. Having taught this course I am going to pass CEFR exam and resieve Level B2 degree. I hope this great opportunity for me and you given. In the future your company suuport everybody who wants learn English well. I look forward to reseiving your response soon. Yors faithfully. Tina
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to
Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.
enquire
to study to the English Teachers Training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Course
which I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
saw
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information online about it. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
vital to rise their knowledge more and more. The training
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
is
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organised
per online for teachers to redevelop more their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and techniques between two and three weeks by the most experienced foreigner trainers. It gives us to be aware of knowing the educational news. Having taught this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
course
I am going to pass CEFR exam and
Possible spelling mistake found.
resieve
Level B2 degree. I hope this great opportunity for me and you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
. In the future your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
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suuport
everybody who
Probably a preposition is missing after 'wants'.
wants learn
English well. I look forward to
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reseiving
your response
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Yors
faithfully
. Tina
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IELTS letter Write aletter to manager of the company. explane what the problem is.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
123 words
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text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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