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You are concerned about a proposal to build a supermarket on land that is at present a local park in the area where you live. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper explaining your objections.

You are concerned about a proposal to build a supermarket on land that is at present a local park in the area where you live. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper explaining your objections. BMKWd
Dear SIr, I am writing to share my concerns about the city council's proposal to build a supermarket on the land that is currently a local park in the Mayur Vihar region. While I understand that the development projects should not get hindered because of trivial issues, the lives of the people must not get hampered as a consequence. The park is used by the local residents as a meeting spot on a regular basis. Not only do individuals use that land for festive celebrations, but it is also an important venue for holding resident welfare meetings. Moreover, it is used as a landmark by new immigrants, which makes it easy for all to commute in and around the Mayur Vihar region. Although I understand that the new supermarket will benefit all the people nearby by facilitating their daily needs, the issues it will create in the future cannot be ignored at all. Firstly, air and noise pollution will significantly increase, since the superstore will attract large volumes of people in a constraint place; thus, making the area a breeding ground for hazardous diseases. Secondly, traffic jams will increase owing to parking problems that are present in the area. In particular, if the lives of the residents need to be improved, it is better to think of an alternative to avoid any problems to the local population. One of the best ways to ensure the development of the area is to improve the livelihood of local shopkeepers, as this will benefit the public and city council at the same pace. I, on behalf of all the residents, request you to take this matter seriously and provide a constructive resolution. Thank you for reading the letter to the end and I hope for a positive revert from your end. Yours faithfully, Rohit
Dear
SIr
,

I am writing to share my concerns about the city council's proposal to build a supermarket on the land
that is
currently
a
local
park in the
Mayur
Vihar
region. While I understand that the development projects should not
get
hindered
because
of trivial issues, the
lives
of the
people
must
not
get
hampered as a consequence.

The park is
used
by the
local
residents
as a meeting spot on a regular basis. Not
only
do individuals
use
that land for festive celebrations,
but
it is
also
an
important
venue for holding
resident
welfare meetings.
Moreover
, it is
used
as a landmark by new immigrants, which
makes
it easy for all to commute in and around the
Mayur
Vihar
region.

Although I understand that the new supermarket will benefit all the
people
nearby by facilitating their daily needs, the issues it will create in the future cannot be
ignored
at all.
Firstly
, air and noise pollution will
significantly
increase, since the superstore will attract large volumes of
people
in a constraint place;
thus
, making the area a breeding ground for hazardous diseases.
Secondly
, traffic jams will increase owing to parking problems that are present in the area.
In particular
, if the
lives
of the
residents
need to be
improved
, it is better to
think
of an alternative to avoid any problems to the
local
population.

One of the best ways to ensure the development of the area is to
improve
the livelihood of
local
shopkeepers, as this will benefit the public and city council at the same pace.

I, on behalf of all the
residents
, request you to take this matter
seriously
and provide a constructive resolution. Thank you for reading the letter to the
end
and I hope for a
positive
revert from your
end
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rohit
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IELTS letter You are concerned about a proposal to build a supermarket on land that is at present a local park in the area where you live. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper explaining your objections.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
300 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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