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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Say who you are Give details about the accident . Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Say who you are Give details about the accident. Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents GMMxg

I am writing this complaint letter about an accident that happened with me during buying some groceries from your Superstore. I am Joy Warne, an working as a operational manager in a multinational company. I live a few miles away from your grocery store Walmart. As a regular customer, every weekend, I have to go to the Walmart for buying some foods, fruits, and other necessary items. It is the matter of regret that during my last visit at the supermarket, I found the frozen food area wet. I guess it might be due to the technical error in the freezer or negligence of the maintenance worker. Unfortunately, I slipped my footstep while passing that area since I did not have any idea about that. Even though it was a minor accident, it could be more worse. Moreover, I noticed many elder people come to this store everyday for shopping but it is extremely dangerous to have such an area that could possibly harm to people. I believe, Walmart is having the best management system who would take the best action against this happening. Also, this superstore is very essential for people and thousands of people are coming to this store everyday. As a manager of the store, it’s your responsibility to avoid such types of accidents. I suggest you to maintain the electrical device frequently and also place warning signs to make persons aware about such area. Apart from this, I recommend you to hire more qualified and professional cleaning team in the Walmart and make sure to provide training to them. I hope you will immediate attention to this matter. Your faithfully, Joy Warne.

I am writing this complaint letter about an accident that happened The verb 'happen' usually requires the preposition "to".to
with
 me during buying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 groceries from your Superstore.

I am Joy Possible spelling mistake found.WarnerWayneWarnedWarnWarnsWare
Warne
, Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 working as Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 operational manager in a multinational This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 a few miles away from your grocery You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
 Walmart. As a regular customer, every weekend, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to the Walmart for buying This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 foods, fruits, and other necessary items.

It is the matter of regret that during my last visit at the supermarket, I found the frozen food You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 wet. I guess it might be due to the technical error in the freezer or negligence of the maintenance worker. Unfortunately, I slipped my footstep while passing that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 since I did not have any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 about that. Even though
 it was a minor accident, it could be Use only "worse" (without 'more') when you use the comparative.worse
more worse
. Moreover
, I noticed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 elder This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
 for shopping This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it is extremely
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hazardousrisky
dangerous
 to have such an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
 that could possibly
 harm to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

I believe, Walmart is having the best management system who would take the best action against this happening. Also
, this superstore is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 essential for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 and thousands of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 are coming to this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean "every day"?every day
everyday
. As a manager of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstock
store
, it’s your responsibility to avoid such types of accidents.

I suggest you to maintain the electrical device frequently
 and also
 place warning signs to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 persons aware about such You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. Apart from this, I recommend you to hire more qualified and professional cleaning team in the Walmart and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure to provide training to them.

I hope you It seems that a verb or adverb has been misspelled or is missing here.will be immediatewill have immediate
will immediate
 attention to this matter.

Did you mean "Yours"? (complimentary close)Yours
Your
faithfully
,

Joy Possible spelling mistake found.WarnerWayneWarnedWarnWarnsWare
Warne
. 