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You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life E33xB
Dear Mr Smith, I am writing to put your attention on a few damaged accessories, although, an apartment is exquisite. Looking at, the area of the flat is spacious and airy with beautiful furniture and interior. It has a balcony for outside sitting, a washing area, and a garden. However, I am enduring such issues as entrance door lock, broken leg of the couch, and leakage in taps. Solving these minor problems could ease my routine. In regards, It can help to save water in the water tank, safety from the break-in and relaxed sofa can pent off the exaggeration and relax. Therefore, these all need to repair on a priority. I hoping to hear from you soon and try to make it quickly. Yours faithfully,
Dear Mr Smith,

I am writing to put your attention on a few damaged accessories, although, an apartment is exquisite.

Looking at, the area of the flat is spacious and airy with
beautiful
furniture and interior. It has a balcony for outside sitting, a washing area, and a garden.

However
, I am enduring such issues as entrance door lock, broken leg of the couch, and leakage in taps. Solving these minor problems could
ease
my routine.

In regards, It can
help
to save water in the water tank, safety from the break-in and relaxed sofa can pent off the exaggeration and relax.
Therefore
, these all need to repair on a priority.

I hoping
to hear from you
soon
and try to
make
it
quickly
.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You rent an apartment. You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

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  American English
7 paragraphs
126 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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