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You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and shy you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and shy you think the restaurant is worth visiting. bYYWg
Dear editor, My name is Susan Oliver. I am writing regarding a wonderful local restaurant, where I took my family to wine and dine last week. We had a special occasion to celebrate and a month ago we started a research where to organize an interesting dinner. Our choice was for the Barrera, a recently opened local restaurant specialized on French cuisine. First, we found a warm reception on arriving the place, as we did not have to wait even a blink having booked in advance. Second, the place was a quiet one. In other words, gentle, relaxing instrumental music was heard in a way that the visitors could talk and hear each other easily. Third, turning to the meal served, my mouth is still watering when I remember the wonderful stake we ordered. It was marinated in wine. The main meal was perfectly accompanied by fried rice. We were offered a complimentary dessert, a fluffy fruit cake. Finally, not only the food and atmosphere were attractive, but also the price was reasonable. In conclusion, I will recommend publishing a review of this restaurant in the “Enjoy your Food” section of your daily, so that food lovers also discover this place, as I would mention the meal was worth every penny. Yours faithfully, Susan Oliver
Dear editor,

My name is Susan Oliver. I am writing regarding a wonderful local restaurant, where I took my family to wine and dine last week.

We had a special occasion to celebrate and a month ago we
started
a research where to organize an interesting dinner. Our choice was for the Barrera, a recently opened local restaurant specialized on French cuisine.
First
, we found a warm reception on arriving the place, as we did not
have to
wait even a blink having booked in advance. Second, the place was a quiet one.
In other words
, gentle, relaxing instrumental music
was heard
in a way that the visitors could talk and hear each other
easily
. Third, turning to the meal served, my mouth is
still
watering when I remember the wonderful stake we ordered. It
was marinated
in wine. The main meal was
perfectly
accompanied by fried rice. We
were offered
a complimentary dessert, a fluffy fruit cake.
Finally
, not
only
the food and atmosphere were attractive,
but
also
the price was reasonable.

In conclusion
, I will recommend publishing a review of this restaurant in the “Enjoy your Food” section of your daily,
so
that food lovers
also
discover this place, as I would mention the meal was worth every penny.

Yours
faithfully
,

Susan Oliver
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IELTS letter You had a good meal at a local restaurant with your family. Write a letter to the newspaper to tell them about it, describe the meal you had and shy you think the restaurant is worth visiting.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
214 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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