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Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan

Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan 155qM
Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan
Dear Jot,

I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is
extremely
unfortunate that you had this accident,
especially
when we are having a
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big
match
next
week.

Our manager
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told
me that you
are admitted
in the PGI hospital.
That is
the best hospital in our city and you will
be recovered
in few days by their
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good
faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI,
moreover
, she will be coming to
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see
you in the
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evening and
she will always be there to
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help
you.

I have
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some
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good
news for you;
firstly
, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have
been selected
as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your
further
studies. I will be coming this Sunday to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
you.
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Please
take care of yourself.

Best Wishes,

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Karan
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IELTS letter Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan

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