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Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan

Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan 155qM

Dear Jot,

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good
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 news for you; firstly
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meet
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Please
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Best Wishes,

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IELTS letter Dear Jot, I am sorry to hear that you have fallen and fractured your leg. It is extremely unfortunate that you had this accident, especially when we are having a big match next week. Our manager told me that you are admitted in the PGI hospital. That is the best hospital in our city and you will be recovered in few days by their good faculty and facilities. My cousin Anita is a nurse in PGI, moreover, she will be coming to see you in the evening and she will always be there to help you. I have some good news for you; firstly, owing to your performance in the last week’s match you have been selected as a captain. Apart from this, you have been getting the scholarship for your further studies. I will be coming this Sunday to meet you. Please take care of yourself. Best Wishes, Karan

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149 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

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Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

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