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You were doing a short course at another country however you had to leave the course unexpectedly to fly back home

You were doing a short course at another country however you had to leave the course unexpectedly to fly back home PLObB

Dear Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you that i will not be able to continue the course of the History because of my Family issues, I have to go back to my country India immediately. I am pursuing second semester in History in your college and enjoying it a lot. My best time was its exhibition of many artifacts and coins of an Indus civilization as well as Harrapan civilization. I got an opportunity to lead my team. We all had welcomed some well known historans to this event. I had learned a lot which made me more passionate to gain knowledge about history. Unfortunately. My mother suffered a cardiac arrest and had minor heart attack two days before. I am a single child of my parents and there was no one to take care of her as my father is working in some other state. For him it takes time to get a long leave from work. So, i have to leave my course in between and move back to my city. I am was extremely grateful to you for your assistance in studies and it was wonderful being your student. Yours Sincerely, Pawanpreet.

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