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write a letter to request your superior to ask leave for some days

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Dear raqhav, I am writing this letter to convey my leave for upcoming week. As a data analyst whenever, i immersed in my work in our production related projects i do realize that i should participate in offline program course which will be very much beneficial for my carrier. However, This course is facilitated by ‘y-axis’ which is one of the biggest organisation in India. As a data analyst, i found it to be value adding my current position. It not only gives me a credentials to be data analyst but also enhance as a structural analyst which gives high revenue to company. Let me describe you in detail. The reason for taking this course is it will cut off extra time and learned resources help in saving cost. On the brighter side, this is a valuable knowledge where i can taught my team mates too. Because, i believe in ‘care, share and grow together’. This can motivate employees and keep engage them in work arena. Moreover, this updated course can help to deal with new projects. This can only possible if i get opportunity to get trained. Therefore, i will be attending classes for next 2 weeks. During this time period i need to be singularly focus. Also it will be hard for me to balanced both tasks. Also i finished the essential projects which need to be submitted in these two upcoming weeks. Moreover, Mr. Raju ready to back up on me in my absence. Indeed am very much grateful toward him. But i will keep myself available in urgency. i would be grateful if you allow me to go for it. Hopefully, you will pay attention to it. yours sincerely, uzma samreen ****************************************************************************
Dear
raqhav
,

I am writing this letter to convey my
leave
for upcoming week. As a data
analyst
whenever,
i
immersed in my work in our production related projects
i
do realize that
i
should participate in offline program
course
which will be
very
much beneficial for my carrier.
However
, This
course
is facilitated
by ‘y-axis’ which is one of the biggest
organisation
in India. As a data
analyst
,
i
found it to be value adding my
current
position. It not
only
gives me
a credentials
to be data
analyst
but
also
enhance as a structural
analyst
which gives high revenue to
company
.

Let
me
describe
you in detail. The reason for taking this
course
is it will
cut
off extra time and learned resources
help
in saving cost. On the brighter side, this is a valuable knowledge where
i
can taught my
team mates
too.
Because
,
i
believe in ‘care, share and grow together’. This can motivate employees and
keep
engage them in work arena.
Moreover
, this updated
course
can
help
to deal with new projects. This can
only
possible if
i
get
opportunity to
get
trained.

Therefore
,
i
will be attending classes for
next
2 weeks. During this time period
i
need to be
singularly
focus
.
Also
it will be
hard
for me
to balanced
both tasks.
Also
i
finished the essential projects which need to
be submitted
in these two upcoming weeks.
Moreover
, Mr.
Raju
ready to back up on me in my absence.
Indeed
am
very
much grateful toward him.
But
i
will
keep
myself available in urgency.
i
would be grateful if you
allow
me to go for it.

Hopefully
, you will pay attention to it.

yours
sincerely
,

uzma
samreen


****************************************************************************
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