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You have recently gone to an international camp, having spent a week abroad. Write an email to a friend, telling him/her about your experience. Include information about where you stayed, what you did and how you benefitted from the experience.

You have recently gone to an international camp, having spent a week abroad. Write an email to a friend, telling him/her about your experience. Include information about where you stayed, what you did and how you benefitted from the experience. aQk1o
TO: . . . . . anca@yahoo. com FROM: . . . . alexandra@yahoo. com SUBJECT: the international camp Dear Anca, I’m writing you to tell my experience about the international camp I went to recently. In this camp I met a lot of people from all around the world. Tought I had some people I know around me all the time, it still felt weird being in such a large crowd of strangers. I’ve met a lot of sociable, funny and smart guys which I befriended on socil medias so I could keep contact with them. We have visited lots of interesting places such as museums, painting gallery and amusement parks. This activity was a great experience and I would do it again if I ever had change to. Love, Alexandra
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SUBJECT: the international
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camp


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Anca
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I’m writing you to
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tell
my experience about the international camp I went
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recently. In this camp I met
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a lot of
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people
from all around the world.
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some
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people
I know around me all the time, it
still
felt weird being in such a large crowd of strangers.

I’ve met
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a lot of
sociable,
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funny
and smart guys which I befriended on
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socil
medias
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so
I could
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keep
contact with them. We have visited lots of interesting places such as museums, painting gallery and amusement parks.

This activity was a great experience and I would do it again if I ever had
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change
to.

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Love
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Alexandra
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IELTS letter You have recently gone to an international camp, having spent a week abroad. Write an email to a friend, telling him/her about your experience. Include information about where you stayed, what you did and how you benefitted from the experience.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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