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An English speaking women who lives in your town.

An English speaking women who lives in your town. parlL
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have come across your advertisement. As you're looking for help for some hours in your home next summer, I can provide support by organizing your kitchen and look after other household daily chores. If you wish I can accompany you in buying grocery and fruits from the super-market as I am aware of several local shops which have good stuff, and they give discounts as well. I believe in performing community service, helping elderly and needy whenever I have time over the weekends. I feel blessed to have the opportunity to serve the needy in need of an hour someone in need and look after other household daily chores. In addition, I would love to help you because I love organizing and designing kitchens. I can visit your home in weekends as I’m not available on weekdays due to office work. On weekends I can spend a few hours at your home easily and help you with your work. Kindly inform me on the mobile no. given below if you desire to engage me. Looking forward to a positive response. Yours Sincerely, XYZ
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
across your advertisement. As you're looking for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
hours in your home
next
summer, I can provide support by organizing your kitchen and look after other household daily chores. If you wish I can accompany you in buying grocery and fruits from the super-market as I am aware of several local shops which have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
stuff, and they give discounts
as well
.

I believe in performing community service, helping elderly and needy whenever I have time over the weekends. I feel blessed to have the opportunity to serve the needy in need of an hour someone in need and look after other household daily chores.
In addition
, I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to
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help
you
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because
I
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love
organizing and designing kitchens.

I can visit your home in weekends as I’m not available on weekdays due to office work. On
The comma is probably missing here: "weekends, I".
weekends I
can spend a few hours at your home
easily
and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you with your work. Kindly inform me on the mobile no.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
below if you desire to engage me.

Looking forward to a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
response.

Yours
Sincerely
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter An English speaking women who lives in your town.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
192 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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