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you stayed in hotel a few days

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Dear Sir As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the air conditioner of the room 102 which/who did not work properly I was your Guest from October 1 to October 8. There are many aspects about the mentioned matter the first thing that I want to talk about is related to air conditioner. To provide more explanation, I should say that my room was too hot and I could not stand it. In addition to this, it is good to point out nobody answered me. A far as the purpose of this letter is concerned, I should say that to my satisfaction, you have to do something. Yours faithfully, Kiarash Fadavi
Dear Sir

As a matter of fact, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the air conditioner of the room 102 which/who did not work
properly
I was your Guest from October 1 to October 8.

There are
many
aspects about the mentioned matter the
first
thing that I want to talk about
is related
to air conditioner. To provide more explanation, I should say that my room was too hot and I could not stand it.
In addition
to this, it is
good
to point out nobody answered me.

A far as the purpose of this letter
is concerned
, I should say that to my satisfaction, you
have to
do something.

Yours
faithfully
,

Kiarash
Fadavi
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IELTS letter you stayed in hotel a few days

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  American English
6 paragraphs
118 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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