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Write a letter to your momy for happy woman's day

Write a letter to your momy for happy woman's day NwQaN
Yah, long time no see ~ Just only 6 days left until the special day which call "Woman's day". Hence, I write this letter send to my mom who bring me up in the whole life. After pandemic finish, I'm going to study far home. So, in that time, while I'm staying home, I just wanna tell you that "Thanks for your all support, your enthusiasm, your generous, and especially, thanks for giving me a life". I know you were worked very hard to earn money to raise ours, however, in this day, I hope you have a day filled with fun, relaxation and great time with our family. Last but not least, every home, every heart, every feeling, every moment of happiness is incomplete without you, only you can complete this world. Happy Vietnamese Women's Day!
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Thanks for your all support, your enthusiasm, your generous, and
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you can complete this world. Happy Vietnamese Women's Day!
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your momy for happy woman's day

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  American English
1 paragraphs
137 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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