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You recently heard about a networking conference that you would like to attend. Write a letter to your boss and explain

You recently heard about a networking conference that you would like to attend. Write a letter to your boss and explain dkl5r
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you and seek permission from you for attending a networking conference. The conference that I want to attend is based on improving technical skills and it will also help in tactics to improve the branding of the company. This meeting would be held on coming Monday at 11: 00 am in the Westen Hotel, Mumbai. I find this conference important to attend because it will help me with connections as well as about the brand reputation. Technical knowledge is very important for our company as it is an animation based company. So, it would give me exposure to what other people in the industry are doing like which type of scripts they are using. At this conference, many experienced industry leaders are going to present their lectures and learning some secret tips from them would be beneficial. Kindly allow me to attend the conference at the above stated time. Yours faithfully, Amanpreet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to inform you and seek permission from you for attending a networking conference.

The
conference
that I want to attend
is based
on improving technical
skills
and it will
also
help
in tactics to
improve
the branding of the
company
. This meeting would
be held
on coming Monday at 11: 00 am in the
Westen
Hotel, Mumbai.

I find this
conference
important
to attend
because
it will
help
me with connections
as well
as about the brand reputation. Technical knowledge is
very
important
for our
company
as it is an animation based
company
.
So
, it would give me exposure to what other
people
in the industry are doing like which type of scripts they are using. At this
conference
,
many
experienced industry leaders are going to present their lectures and learning
some
secret tips from them would be beneficial.

Kindly
allow
me to attend the
conference
at the above stated time.

Yours
faithfully
,
Amanpreet
Kaur
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IELTS letter You recently heard about a networking conference that you would like to attend. Write a letter to your boss and explain

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
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