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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. Write a letter to the Registrar, complaining about the service you received.

You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. Write a letter to the Registrar, complaining about the service you received. Yr0V
Dear Sir/Madam, Today I am writing this letter to you to inform you not only about a very unpleasent situation and unbearable in terms of a hospital but very bothering and disturbing indeed, What happened to me and my daughter with a very unprofessional and this kind of management inside the hospital must be addressed effectively and suffiecntly, I had to wait with my daughter for almost too long for a doctor to check on her health, she felt extremely unwell and her pain went on fruther and fruther, I am asking for a very quick responsable action that must be implamented to end such long waiting for a doctor, The following details are the perfect soultion to such severe problem, Appropriate masure to amplify the correct timetable and the avaliable staff for a very high demand, Increase the number of doctors each shift and the maintenance must be on a daily basis, More neruses and staff memberes well trained and with much more experience to help curp this waiting list problem that impact not only the sick who are in much pain but also the acompanying person, Looking forward to hearing from you,
Dear Sir/Madam,

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only
about a
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unpleasent
situation and unbearable in terms of a hospital
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but
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very
bothering and disturbing
indeed
, What happened to me and my daughter with a
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very
unprofessional and this kind of management inside the hospital
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must
be addressed
effectively
and
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suffiecntly
,

I had to wait with my daughter for almost too long for a doctor to
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check
on her health, she felt
extremely
unwell and her pain went on
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fruther
and
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fruther
, I am asking for a
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very
quick
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responsable
action that
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must
be
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implamented
to
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end
such long waiting for a doctor,

The following
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details
are the perfect
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soultion
to such severe problem,

Appropriate
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masure
to amplify the correct timetable and the
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avaliable
staff for a
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very
high demand, Increase the number of doctors each shift and the maintenance
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must
be on a daily basis, More
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neruses
and staff
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memberes
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well trained
and with much more experience to
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help
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curp
this waiting list problem that impact not
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only
the sick who are in much pain
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but
also
the
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acompanying
person, Looking forward to hearing from you,
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IELTS letter You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. Write a letter to the Registrar, complaining about the service you received.

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  American English
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194 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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