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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take DjD7
Dear Mr Smith, I am Ankita, currently residing in your apartment number B-3 situated in Vasant Vihar. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the furnitures provided in the apartment. To further elaborate, there are two beds in the house, both of them has dismantled legs and are kept on bricks to support them. Aditionally, there is a sofa which is so delicate that anybody could barely sit on them. To add on to my pain, there is a TV table which has bent because of the weight of Telivision. These issues have created so much worry in my mind that i can't think of inviting people at my house. I am afraid, if they sit on the sofa it might break or even worse, the TV might fall on someone's head. I would urge you to replace these dangerous items from the house immediately before it harms anyone. Furthermore, I would like you to curtail my monthly rent by 20% as we were promised to get a fully furnished house in a very good condition, which unfortunately is not the case. Thanks for your consideration. Yours faithfully Ankita
Dear Mr Smith,

I am Ankita,
currently
residing in your apartment number B-3 situated in
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Vasant
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Vihar
. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
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furnitures
provided in the apartment.

To
further
elaborate, there are two beds in the
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house
, both of them has dismantled legs and are
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kept
on bricks to support them.
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Aditionally
, there is a sofa which is
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so
delicate that anybody could
barely
sit on them. To
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add
on to my pain, there is a TV table which has bent
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because
of the weight of
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Telivision
. These issues have created
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so
much worry in my mind that
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i
can't
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think
of inviting
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people
at my
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house
. I am afraid, if they sit on the sofa it might break or even worse, the TV might fall on someone's head.

I would urge you to replace these
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dangerous
items from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
house
immediately
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before
it harms anyone.
Furthermore
, I would like you to curtail my monthly rent by 20% as we
were promised
to
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get
a
fully
furnished
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house
in a
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very
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good
condition, which unfortunately is not the case.

Thanks for your consideration.

Yours
faithfully


Ankita
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

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  American English
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6.0
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