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camera shipment with misisng lens

camera shipment with misisng lens g9wa

Dear Sir / Madam, I have purchased a DSLR model no. 235YS from your reputed online showroom just last thursday. I had even opted for a premium delivery owing to the short notice as I was due to travel the same day as I received the shipment. Obviously that was the reason I couldn't inspect the package, also trusting that being a premium purchase, the necessary checks would have been run. But to my utter shock and disappointment, the main lens of the camera was missing, rendering it completely useless. The whole purpose of this purchase was to aid my educational trip for photo documentation and the entire assignment stands ruined now. I have spent a lot of money and time to plan this tour and I cannot return without completing the assignment. Hence I request you to ship the specific lens immediately to the address mentioned in the hotels letterhead enclosed with this letter. Also keeping the receipt of the purchase for the exact model details. I also would expect a free of cost delivery of the same and hope to receive it by friday latest. That would leave me with the weekend to complete the task in hand. Expecting swift action. Yours faithfully, Remya

Dear Sir / Madam,

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 a DSLR model no. 235YS from your reputed online showroom This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 last Possible spelling mistake found.ThursdayThursdays
thursday
. I had even opted for a premium delivery owing to the short notice as I was due to travel the same day as I received the shipment. Obviously
 that was the reason I couldn't inspect the package, also
 trusting that being a premium This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
, the necessary This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitors
checks
 would have been run
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 to my utter shock and disappointment, the main lens of the camera was missing, rendering it completely useless. The whole purpose of this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 was to aid my educational trip for photo documentation and the entire assignment stands ruined This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
.

I have spent This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 money and time to plan this tour and I cannot return without completing the assignment. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Hence,
Hence
 I request you to ship the specific lens immediately to the address mentioned in the hotels letterhead enclosed with this letter. Also
 keeping the receipt of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 for the exact model This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
. I also
 would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 a free of cost delivery of the same and hope to receive it by Possible spelling mistake found.FridayFridays
friday
 latest. That would This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :depart
leave
 me with the weekend to complete the task in hand.

Expecting swift action.

Yours faithfully
,

Possible spelling mistake found.REMARem yaRemy
Remya