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You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them dG3o
Hi Arun, Hope all is well at your end. As I told you earlier, I have joined my new job and it’s going great. I Just wanted to let you know how grateful and thankful really I am for allowing me to stay at your house for a week helping me to attend the training course smoothly. It would have been great difficulty if I had to find a hotel to stay in such short notice as they informed me about the training only few days before the start of the training. Also I must definitely speak about the hospitality that the entire family showed treated me as one of their family members. I always had a longing to taste the authentic south indian thali and when I noticed the same during my lunch, I was much delighted and really enjoyed the food. Besides, I also had great fun in the shopping mall where you taught me to play poker and still I laugh when I think about the simple shots I missed while playing. In fact, I never felt the stress irrespective of the full day training program after returning home and made me feel very comfortable. Though it was a week only, I really miss everyone at the house after returning back to my place. Please send my gratitude to everyone in your family. Take care. Best wishes, Renuka
Hi Arun,

Hope all is well at your
end
. As I
told
you earlier, I have
joined
my new job and it’s going great. I
Just
wanted to
let
you know how grateful and thankful
really
I am for allowing me to stay at your
house
for a week helping me to attend the training course
smoothly
. It would have been great difficulty if I had to find a hotel to stay in such short notice as they informed me about the training
only
few days
before
the
start
of the training.

Also
I
must
definitely speak about the hospitality that the entire family
showed
treated me as one of their family members. I always had a longing to taste the authentic south
indian
thali
and when I noticed the same during my lunch, I was much delighted and
really
enjoyed the food.

Besides
, I
also
had great fun in the shopping mall where you taught me to play poker and
still
I laugh when I
think
about the simple shots I missed while playing. In fact, I never felt the
stress
irrespective of the full day training program after returning home and made me feel
very
comfortable. Though it was a week
only
, I
really
miss everyone at the
house
after
returning back
to my place.

Please
send
my gratitude to everyone in your family. Take care.

Best wishes,

Renuka
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IELTS letter You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend's house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, thank them for having you at their house for a week express your gratitude for their hospitality say how much you miss them

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  American English
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6.0
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