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You have heard that your company is organizing a language training abroad for limited number of participants. Write a letter of interest: say your position in your company, explain why they should include you in the training, how your training could benefit you and your company.

You have heard that your company is organizing a language training abroad for limited number of participants. Write a letter of interest: say your position in your company, explain why they should include you in the training, how your training could benefit you and your company. RO0Y
Dear Mr. Mehra, I am writing in connection with the circular that is circulating today in our office regarding the enrollment of a linguistic course in spain. My name is Shabnam and I am the one who manages the clients with their issues in our company. As recently, our firm is collaborated with spanish people, I face menace in tackling the problems owing to language barrier. Acquisition of this particular skill is a necessity for my job as I intend to stay updated with the progress of our employers. I would be a good representable for our company considering the reason that I am a quick learner. Understanding the clintele situations combats half the difficulties. Likewise, proficiency in spanish would assist me to solve the problems with ease satisfying the people from other venture. It will be benefecial for the company which in turn will lead to the personal career growth. I am looking for your acknowledgement of my request. Hope to hear from you soon. yours sincerely, Shabnam
Dear Mr.
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Mehra
,

I am writing in connection with the circular
that is
circulating
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today
in our office regarding the enrollment of a linguistic course in
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spain
.

My name is
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Shabnam and
I am the one who manages the clients with their issues in our
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company
. As recently, our firm
is collaborated
with
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spanish
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people
, I face menace in tackling the problems owing to language barrier.

Acquisition of this particular
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skill
is a necessity for my job as I intend to stay updated with the progress of our employers. I would be a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
representable for our
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
considering the reason that I am a quick learner.

Understanding the
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clintele
situations combats half the difficulties.
Likewise
, proficiency in
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spanish
would assist me to solve the problems with
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ease
satisfying the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
from other venture. It will be
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benefecial
for the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
which in turn will lead to the personal career growth.

I am looking for your
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acknowledgement
of my request. Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
yours
sincerely
,

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Shabnam

IELTS letter You have heard that your company is organizing a language training abroad for limited number of participants. Write a letter of interest: say your position in your company, explain why they should include you in the training, how your training could benefit you and your company.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
168 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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