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A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why

A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why LOqK
I hope this letter finds you in good health. I am obliged to you for offering me the job opportunity in your company. I have known your company from decades and have heard many great projects your company has recently completed. However, I regret to inform you that I will not able to join the organization to the allocated date as I need to mandatory serve three months of notice period. Currently, I am working for Infotect Solution project that I want to finish to add in my portfolio before I make a switch. Also, this is very demanding and challenging client and as a result I can't put the burden of the project on other team members since I was involved from the beginning. If there is no emergency to fill the offered post, then I request to consider my application for this post after 3 months. I hope you consider my suitation. Hope to hear from you soon.
I hope this letter finds you in
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good
health. I
am obliged
to you for offering me the job opportunity in your
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company
.
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I
have known your
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company
from decades
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have
heard
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many
great projects your
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company
has recently completed.

However
, I regret to inform you that I will not able to
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join
the organization to the allocated date as I need to mandatory serve three months of notice period.

Currently
, I am working for
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Infotect
Solution project that I want to finish to
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add
in my portfolio
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before
I
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make
a switch.
Also
, this is
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very
demanding and

challenging client and
as a result
I can't put the burden of the project on other team members since I
was involved
from the beginning.

If there is no emergency to fill the offered post, then I request to consider my application for this post after 3 months. I hope you consider my
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suitation
.

Hope to hear from you
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soon
.

IELTS letter A friend has offered you some work in his company. You are currently employed and not able to start for 3 months. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter: – give details of what you know about his company. – explain your current situation – give your answer to the offer and explain why

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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