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You want your friend to come to your partner's surprise party write a letter inviting your friend to the party .

You want your friend to come to your partner's surprise party write a letter inviting your friend to the party. x072N
Dear Sami, How are you? hope everything in you life is well. I want to invite you to attend to my friend Liza brith day. She is turning tewenty four by 12th of this month. So I have planed a surprising brithday party next saturdy night from 8 PM at my hous' roof. We are going to serve a lot of food, which was made by liza's parents, and fresh drinks. If you come to the party, you will dance because DJ Hosam is coming. In fact I have palned this party to make liza feel better and more cheerful after her hard last year. All of our friends have been invited; besides liza'a parents. I hope to see you in the party and have good time togather. let's have a wonderful party to cheer Liza warm wishes motasem
Dear Sami,

How are you?
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hope
everything in
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you life
is well. I want to invite you to attend to my friend Liza
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brith
day. She is turning
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tewenty
four by 12th of this month.
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So
I have planed a surprising
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brithday
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party
next
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saturdy
night from 8 PM at my
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hous
' roof.

We are going to serve
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a lot of
food, which
was made
by
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liza
's parents, and fresh drinks. If you
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come
to the
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party
, you will dance
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because
DJ
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Hosam
is coming. In
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fact I
have
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palned
this
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party
to
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make
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liza
feel better and more cheerful after her
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hard
‘last year’ indicates a finished event of the past. Please check the predicate's tense.
last year
.

All of our friends have
been invited
;
besides
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liza
'a parents. I hope to
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see
you in the
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party
and have
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good
time
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togather
.

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let
's have a wonderful
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party
to cheer Liza

warm wishes

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motasem

IELTS letter You want your friend to come to your partner's surprise party write a letter inviting your friend to the party.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
138 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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