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Write a letter to your friend to tell that you moved into new place

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Dear xyz How are you? Hope you are doing good. I am fine here. As you know that i was staying in the college hostel from past 2 years. Recently i moved to a new flat and i am writing this letter to tell you about the new place i moved. Earlier i was living in a hostel which was approximately 2 kilometer away from my university. I was facing difficulty in travelling and it was costing me too much, so i decided to move in a flat with my friend which is near to my education centre. I want to tell you that we have 2 rooms, a big kitchen which is equipped with all the needed appliances. It is a spacious apartment with a beautiful lawn in front. Best thing is that we have our personal car parking space. Now whenever you visit delhi, i want you to stay with me at my place and we can spend some quality time together. Hope to see you soon. My Regards to family. Yours lovingly Mahi
Dear
xyz


How are you? Hope you are doing
good
.

I am fine here.
As
you know that
i
was staying in the college hostel from past 2 years. Recently
i
moved
to a new flat and
i
am writing this letter to
tell
you about the new place
i
moved
.

Earlier
i
was living in a hostel which was approximately 2
kilometer
away from my university. I was facing difficulty in travelling and it was costing me too much,
so
i
decided to
move
in a flat with my friend which is near to my education
centre
.

I want to
tell
you that we have 2 rooms, a
big
kitchen which
is equipped
with all the needed appliances. It is a spacious apartment with a
beautiful
lawn in front.
Best
thing is that we have our personal car parking space.

Now
whenever you visit
delhi
,
i
want you to stay with me at my
place and
we can spend
some
quality time together. Hope to
see
you
soon
. My Regards to family.

Yours
lovingly


Mahi
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend to tell that you moved into new place

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
175 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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