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a letter of information about the Tertiary Preparation

a letter of information about the Tertiary Preparation 26JmJ

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like a number of information about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. If possible I would like to enroll in this course as a part-time student in 1992. I left school eight years ago after completing the 1ISC. Since then, I have worked as a sales assistant in both Grace Bros and David Jones. From the beginning of this year I have been in charge of the Children's Wear Department in Grace Bros, Lily field. However, in order to advance any further in my career into a managerial position, I will need to do some further study, such as a Marketing or Business Course. due to the fact I have not studied for numerous years, I believe that I should complete the TPC previously enrolling in a Business course. Could you please send me the information as in the near future as possible, and tell me the dates for enrolling in the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Yours faithfully.

Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: "much information", "a good deal of information".much informationa good deal of information
a number of information
 about the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. If possible I would like to enroll in this course as a part-time student in 1992. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 school eight years ago after completing the 1ISC. Since then, I have worked as a sales assistant in both Grace Bros and David Jones. From the beginning of this year I have been in charge of the Children's Wear Department in Grace Bros, Lily field. However
, in order to advance any further
 in my career into a managerial position, I will need to do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
further
 study, such as a Marketing or Business Course. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterDue
due
 to the fact I have not studied for numerous years, I believe that I should complete the TPC previously enrolling in a Business course. Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the information as in the near future as possible, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 me the dates for enrolling in the Tertiary Preparation Certificate. Yours faithfully
. 