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issue with neighbor dog 1. wat issue 2. why important to address 3. what can be done.

issue with neighbor dog 1. wat issue 2. why important to address 3. what can be done. DVyVa
Dear Mr. Williams, I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the problem faced by your dog. As you may already be aware of, your pet at night makes detours around the neighborhood and barks at bystanders incessantly with a loud voice. Due to that, I have awoken several times lately, even experienced sleepless nights, consequently, consulted a doctor and was recommended sleeping pills. It would not have been as big of problem, if I am not in the middle of exams, however, since I am. It is crucial for me to get good sleep at nights as I have morning exams. I would be grateful if you can send the dog, to look after by another person away from the neighborhood. Even though, it is just until I finish my exams which are going to start in the next three weeks. Thank you for taking time to read this letter and I hope to hear from you as soon as possible with a good news. Yours faithfully,
Dear Mr. Williams,

I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the problem faced by your dog. As you may already be aware of, your pet at night
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makes
detours around the neighborhood and barks at bystanders
incessantly
with a loud voice. Due to that, I have awoken several times lately, even experienced sleepless nights,
consequently
, consulted a doctor and
was recommended
sleeping pills.

It would not have been as
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big
of problem, if I am not in the middle of exams,
however
, since I am. It is crucial for me to
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get
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good
sleep at nights as I have morning exams. I would be grateful if you can
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send
the dog, to look after by another person away from the neighborhood.
Even though
, it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
until I finish my exams which are going to
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start
in the
next
three weeks.

Thank you for taking time to read this letter and I hope to hear from you as
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soon
as possible with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
news.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter issue with neighbor dog 1. wat issue 2. why important to address 3. what can be done.

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  American English
5 paragraphs
170 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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