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a letter to my dear freind

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Dear Lisa hello, hope to be perfect and be safe and sound, I Really miss you and your lovely family and wants to appreciate you all for making me that memorable holiday. Your family was consequently kind and the whether was dreamy. Last night after driving all way to home I sat on the sofa and call for a pizza. When delivery arrived I found that I have no idea about where my wallet is really is. So started to looking everywhere in that brief time. Suddenly I remember a blur picture of my wallet on your desk. And found that I Left it behind. All of my identity cards is there too. So it will be your kindness if post it back to me to this further address: 15-2coned street —Ralf avenue- Isfahan- Iran Also, My postal code is: 08933213211 Thanks in advance and hope to See you as in the near future. Regards Mehran
Dear Lisa

hello, hope to be perfect and be safe and sound, I
Really
miss you and your lovely family and wants to appreciate you all for making me that memorable holiday. Your family was
consequently
kind and the whether was dreamy. Last night after driving all way to home I sat on the sofa and call for a pizza.
When
delivery arrived I found that I have no
idea
about where my wallet is
really
is.
So
started
to looking everywhere in that brief time.
Suddenly
I remember a blur picture of my wallet on your desk.

And found that I
Left
it behind. All of my identity cards is there too.
So
it will be your kindness if post it back to me to
this


further
address: 15-2coned street —Ralf avenue- Isfahan- Iran

Also
, My postal code is: 08933213211 Thanks in advance and hope to

See
you as in the near future.

Regards Mehran
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IELTS letter a letter to my dear freind

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
155 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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